But mom i don't want to bring just Crawling home i WANT THEM ALL!!
I guess an AU where they live topside now
Did you think the party was over? NO!
Here we are with a new badge of freshly backed sprites—this time introducing reworked Ara and reworked Amon!
This round, to better listen to feedback, we've decided to go one platform at a time, starting with Discord because it offers faster responses both from our supporters and from us, and then Kickstarter as of yesterday. So let's see what you Tumblr folks have to say!
(Remember you can open the images on a new tab to zoom in!)
So, let's list the changes!
✦ PRE-FEEDBACK:
Defined patterns and accessories
Broader shoulders
More body fat
Made his face thicker
Better patch placement
More relaxed pose
Improved his tattoos (eventually you'll get to see it)
✦ POST DISCORD FEEDBACK:
Gave him his sharp cheekbones back
Made his head a little bigger (was to small)
Made his neck thinner
Gave him his Adam apple back
✦ PRE-FEEDBACK:
More defined clothing + more detail in some areas
Defined silhouette (especially her hair) I wanted it to have more rounded shapes, not that spiky
More relaxed / natural pose
✦ POST DISCORD FEEDBACK:
Corrected how her skirt flows in relation to gravity and her own body
Legs and knees fixed to properly reflect her body shape
Saturation on the upper part of her hair lowered
Upper part of her hair modified to better reflect the fluffiness of the first sprite
Hand pose modified to adjust to her hip
Gave her her moles / beauty marks back
Corrected the stretch marks on her legs to appear more natural
And I think that's it! As always, any kind of feedback is welcome, via any of our socials. You can even contact us privately at info@ravenstar.games! 💜
Before I forget—have some wonderful Holidays, and talk to you soon! 💜
I have to ask since the Grandfather Pride question was asked and melted me: the LI’s age-old meme reactions to the “I want a baby” text 😂 and then their actual feelings about having kids (and how they are with them 🥰)?
FINALLY I have time to answer the second part of your ask, anon! Sorry for making you wait this long, the Kickstarter page is hoarding all my time T_T 💜
✦ Amon: Kids love him—he's one of the pack, after all! The cool guy with the eye patch! And Amon loves them back, of course, but only for a short while. He gets easily overwhelmed. He'd be fine having one or maybe two kids of his own. Being a parent is difficult, which doesn't mean he wouldn't do his best to be the greatest dad to ever exist, but it'd be a bumpy ride for him for sure.
✦ Raeya: She's used to be a role model for kids, so when they meet her in person, she's slightly nervous about giving a good impression, so it's hard for her to let go and just have fun. She has thought about having kids in the past, but she's not confident she'd be a good parent.
✦ Gael: He dreams of having a family as wonderful as his own. He's very sweet to kids, can read them very well, and would be an amazing, understanding and loving parent. He's a worrywart, though, and tends to pamper and overprotect kids in general, so you can guess that'll become "worse" with his own kids.
✦ Envy: Kids make him nervous and they usually don't like him because of their looks. Also, in general, kids fear him because of what's said of him. He's not cruel to kids in the slightest, but they put him on edge. They don't really like the idea of having kids of their own, unfortunately.
✦ Ara: Ara is the best sister in the world (quotation needed), and kids are obsessed with her because "her hair looks like a cloud and smells like candy." She has a lot of experience with kids and can make the naughtiest child behave like an angel. Wouldn't mind forming a family of her own in the future!
✦ Xal: Scared of kids, uncomfortable around them. He has this perception of kids being usually mean and he thinks they are always judging him. He tends to stay away from them, but that doesn't mean he's not nice to them, or tries to be. Doesn't imagine himself being a parent, but he doesn't dislike the idea.
✦ Father Pride: Well, he has raised six of them, so what can I say! He loves kids. Unlike Amon, Pride has all the patience in the world, never gets tired, and sees kids as little people everyone should learn from. Having more kids, though...........maybe he has had enough of that!
How would each ro act after the first morning after waking up next to mc?
FINALLY tackling the old asks! Sorry for taking a while everyone :^3
✦ Amon: Gives the MC a casual "Mornin'" while stretching. He's not a morning person at all so he hugs the MC from behind and buries his face on the crook of their neck, breathing them in. He falls asleep soon after and doesn't let the MC leave the bed.
✦ Raeya: She wakes up before the MC, a bit disorientated. She has to take her time just trying to make sense of her emotions as she watches the MC breathe. She doesn't wake the MC up and goes on about her duties, leaving a letter behind for the MC.
✦ Gael: He's fast asleep, a rare occurrence. He looks so peaceful with the timid morning sun caressing his face. Then his lashes flutter open and he looks at the MC with a smile, lifting a hand to lovingly brush their cheek. "You look heavenly," he mumbles.
✦ Envy: The MC has to wake them up because damn he's sound asleep and he's holding the MC too tight—! They're, of course, terribly flustered and grumpy about being woken up and having been caught in such a position. "C-can't you see I'm trying to sleep? Go away if you are bored."
✦ Ara: She wakes the MC up with kisses, tickles and a bit of wrestling! She's so so happy to have spent the night with the MC and she wants them to know. She wants nothing but to just lay around for a bit and talk, enjoying a lazy morning!
✦ Xal: He's mortified. He doesn't know what he's supposed to do now—he never expected to get this far to begin with. He has to act cool but doesn't know what to say or do, wants to touch the MC but is afraid of waking them up...So he just lays there, still and barely breathing, watching them sleep.
✦ Father Pride: Gently wakes the MC up with kisses. It all comes natural to him. "It is morning, my dear," he whispers in their ear. "There are things I must attend to."
✦ Lázaro: They're already up and about, preparing breakfast. Their hair is a mess, their pajamas are a mess...They're not used to waking up this early, but they want to do something romantic for their first morning with the MC.
✦ Cécile: Most likely didn't sleep. He instead spent the whole night watching the MC closely, careful of every breath they take, feeling them alive next to him. Probably has touched the MC's lips or hands to see them react in their sleep. When the MC wakes up, he's already up, dressed, and completely fresh.
Hello! I just found out about your game yesterday (I haven't tried the demo yet). Sorry to bother you, but I'm kind of confused about the ages of LIs. Since they are gods, are they kind like a thousand/century years old? Or are the ages written in each LI's profile their true age, or do they just represent their appearance ages?
Please ignore this if this is kind of confusing/bothering. Thank you 🙂.
Not a bother at all! You are not the only one who has wondered about this, and the characters will talk about this in game. I also hope you enjoy the demo if you decide to play it!
Short answer is: they're very old if we think about time and age like we know it.
The age in their profiles represent their appearances and how they perceive themselves :^)
I knew about this moment but why didn't anybody tell me first few seconds were from Zoro's pov?
This is Luffy in Zoro's eyes (I'm gonna lose it).
how would the LI feel sharing a bath with mc
✦ Amon: Super comfortable. Would play some music in the background, serve some wine, and have the MC lean back against his chest to enjoy a relaxing moment together. Chances are things would get a bit heated, though...
✦ Raeya: Wouldn't say no if the bathtub is big enough, but doesn't exactly see the objective here. She thinks taking a bath is a waste of time and too much of a hassle. After all, you can get yourself cleaned and together in the shower! Once she's tried it, though, she doesn't mind it on special occassions.
✦ Gael: Loves it. He offers to wash the MC's hair and body, gives them a massage, brushes their hair...He focuses all his attention on them and likes it that way. It would be a pretty romantic and intimate moment, with lots of feathery kisses and sweet embraces.
✦ Envy: Needs heavy convincing and would probably stay out of the water at first, just talking with the MC and watching them as they enjoy the bath. Would bring over a book to distract themself, and eventually he'd join the MC in the bathtub. Not something he'd do too frequently, though; too out of his comfort zone!
✦ Ara: She has the bath salts, the scented candles, the snacks, the flower petals...The MC only has to ask and the bath will be ready and perfect for them to enjoy a wonderful evening, just the two of them. She'd most likely schedule a couple bath every two weeks to ensure the MC is well rested and spend some quality time together!
✦ Xal: Nervous as per usual. He will never get used to it; it's a special kind of intimacy. Not that he dislikes it, though! He just feels a bit too vulnerable. Bubble baths are his favorite because, well, naked bodies are less visible, and... Foam fight!!!!
✦ Father Pride: He usually doesn't have time to take a bath to begin with, so he deeply cherises these moments of calmness. The MC is absolutely welcome to join him, cuddle up to him and enjoy some loving caresses while he reads. He will probably fall asleep, the poor man.
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After ending
What sad songs represent each love interest the best? (please make me cry with them, pleeeeease)
Don't know if they'll make you cry, but I think of the LIs when listening to them and they make emotional :^)
✦ Amon: La canción — Bad Bunny, J Balvin
✦ Raeya: Without you — Ursine Vulpine
✦ Gael: Shots — Imagine Dragons
✦ Envy: What could've been — Sting
✦ Ara: Corps — Yseult
✦ Xal: Broken parts — Smash into Pieces
✦ Father Pride: Everybody's changing — Keane
✦ Lázaro: Ricochet — Starset
✦ Cécile: Last resort — Falling in Reverse
K'uhul Ajaw
Fanart for a snippet of my most favorite heartbreaking moment from swordsmans's fic bone-breaker ospreys mate for life (rated E)