L. V., i found this poem flying too close to the sun
L. V., i found this poem bathing in neon lights
Feedback for your writing project (sorry this took so long)
I'm not good at writing or giving reviews that's why I'm sending this anonymously but your words are always beautiful and heartwrenching. I think it's generous of you to take the time to listen to other people's stories and write them a poem. This includes people like me who don't write but have a lot on my mind and sometimes I want a poem that I can relate to haha
Thank you and just keep writing. And no criticism from me on the technical level because like I said I'm not a writer. I hope this feedback is okay!
No, this is perfect! Thank you so much. I love listening to people's stories and writing them something based on those experiences. I just get worried sometimes that I might not have been able to capture what they wanted, or do their story justice, as some stories people have sent me, I haven't gone through personally, so I'm glad to hear this. Again, thank you <3
L. V., things people say
L. V., you tell me it’s okay
L. V., maybe some people are meant to be sad for a lifetime
L. V., i found this poem worshipping at your feet
L. V., i found this poem when i finally took the mask off
L. V., meet me at the epilogue
L. V., i found this poem left forgotten by a stranger at the local café
Poetry. Prose. Free Verse. May explore dark/sensitive themes.
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