Apparently a lot of people get dialogue punctuation wrong despite having an otherwise solid grasp of grammar, possibly because they’re used to writing essays rather than prose. I don’t wanna be the asshole who complains about writing errors and then doesn’t offer to help, so here are the basics summarized as simply as I could manage on my phone (“dialogue tag” just refers to phrases like “he said,” “she whispered,” “they asked”):
“For most dialogue, use a comma after the sentence and don’t capitalize the next word after the quotation mark,” she said.
“But what if you’re using a question mark rather than a period?” they asked.
“When using a dialogue tag, you never capitalize the word after the quotation mark unless it’s a proper noun!” she snapped.
“When breaking up a single sentence with a dialogue tag,” she said, “use commas.”
“This is a single sentence,” she said. “Now, this is a second stand-alone sentence, so there’s no comma after ‘she said.’”
“There’s no dialogue tag after this sentence, so end it with a period rather than a comma.” She frowned, suddenly concerned that the entire post was as unasked for as it was sanctimonious.
lesbian
gay
bisexual
transgender
queer
pansexual
demisexual
ace
hopeless romantics
cis-men
cis-women
non binary folks
the whole spectrum etc…
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this prompt list was made specifically for my blogs (@mlmxreader and @leesizemores), and is not for any other persons usage; do not use or claim as your own.
"What the fuck?"
"Who's that?"
"I wanted to surprise you"
"There's something you ought to know"
"I just wanted to think you'd care"
"Maybe I'm an idiot, for thinking we could be more"
"Nothing - that's what I am to you, isn't it?"
"Fuck, I am so tired"
"Tired, bored and angry"
"Don't you talk about him"
"That kinda day, huh?"
"We'd never be allowed to be open about us"
"Oh, fuck"
"I want you here with me"
"Please don't change your mind"
"Fall out of love? With you?"
"But I love him"
"Let me help you”
“You’re fucking useless”
“Oh my God, would you just shut the fuck up?”
“Nobody talks that way about you and gets away with it, you know that”
“Stop biting your lip like that”
“Please, just leave me alone”
“That’s your problem, you don’t fucking think”
“Everybody loves you”
“If I didn’t know any better, I’d say you were flirting with me”
“You’re fucking hurt, you idiot”
“It won’t ruin our friendship, will it?”
“You look like you’ve been crying”
“Were you watching me sleep?”
“Oh shut up and kiss me, you fool”
“I just… I just need you to understand that I feel more for you than just friendship”
“Are things ever gonna be the same after this?”
“Are you fucking stupid? We can’t tell people about us!”
“Let me guess, we got lost”
“Oh, please, it’s one weekend away”
“There’s only one fucking bed”
“I didn’t think I could ever feel this way”
“Please, don't be scared"
"I'll always protect you"
"There's nothing for you to worry about"
"Thank God, I thought you were… I thought something had happened"
"Answer me honestly - do you love me?"
"Maybe we can cut a deal"
"I'm so much happier"
"Where do you wanna go?"
"This is… this is wrong, I shouldn't be in love with my best friend"
"Just… hold me for a while"
"What time is it?"
"You're more than welcome to stay for a couple days"
"You look like you saw a ghost"
"I've got an idea"
"We can't keep doing this"
"One of these days, things will be different"
"Can you do that for me?"
"It's always a pleasure to see you"
"Would it be okay if I slept in your bed, with you?"
"Think it over"
"You've always been my favourite person"
"How come you're always awake so early?"
"Are you really that happy to see me?"
"There's no reason why we couldn't"
"You're mine"
"I thought it was clear"
"Here, take my scarf"
"You're friends? You two? Really?"
"Would you really think so little of me?"
"Oh, don't look so sour"
"I saw it all"
"At the end of the day, you know I'll always return to you"
"We're family"
"Really?"
"You scared me!"
"Hold on"
"That suit... it looks really good on you"
"Would you teach me?"
"Quiet"
"Look in my eyes"
"Hey, can we go home?"
"How many times are you gonna come to my rescue?"
"Don't let go"
"No, not tonight, come on"
"It was just a stupid dream"
"You'll always be my hero"
"Five more minutes?"
"Be careful"
"It was actually meant to be a surprise"
"Well, I don't care what the press say"
"You literally have a spare key, why do you still climb through the window?"
"Do you want me to come over?"
"Don't call me that"
"You're lying"
"How come you're always so early?"
"Let me tell you"
"You're safe"
"It's a good song"
"It doesn't seem like we're gonna have any alone time"
PLEASE REBLOG if you (male or female) believe it is perfectly okay and natural for a guy of any age to cry
“This is your daily, friendly reminder to use commas instead of periods during the dialogue of your story,” she said with a smile.
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