On my way..
I love Gabby's personality. She has a tough skin and she has her priorities straight unlike Aaron. I feel bad for her though. She's a strong woman and I feel like Aaron took advantage of that in some aspects. Like, he probably thought she would brush it and move on as no big deal. If I'm going to keep it a 100, Nami and Dutch both wrong. Even before Dutch found out about Nami, she was messing around with Nas at his crib. Two wrongs don't make a right but hey, I just thought I point that out.
I’m glad you love Gabby’s personality, I often have a difficult time with writing from her POV. The fact that you enjoy her really means something to me, thank you. Gabby’s strong, don’t feel sorry for her she got this. Aaron definitely did underestimate Gabby and took her for granted for the last time. Moving forward she’s worried about herself, her children and her company.
Yes, you’re correct Dutch and Nami are both wrong, no doubt about that. For Nami step out her relationship is wrong, but a year out of three years you’ve been in a relationship is straight disrespectful. Nami is on a whole nother level with her bullshit at this point. Dutch wasn’t right either and that will definitely be addressed. Nasir and Dutch both have a lot of explaining to do.
Thank you love, this feedback in particular is helping me with where I’m taking the next two chapters. You gave me something and I’m not sure what it is, but I plan to figure it out. Thanks again.
Justin Combs 😍
I didn't even know you had updated! Now, this A that they speak of, it's not Aaron right?! please, let it not be him, omfg. I'm panicking right now. If it's Aaron, that looks so bad on his part. He got a wife and kids and these supposed to be his homies and he doing something foul like getting another girl pregnant, I can't take it. Nami been fucked up since day one.
A...you mean this brotha right chea,
Yes chile, he's the pappy. He just seems to be digging himself deeper and deeper in to a whole that he may not be able to get himself out of. How they both managed to fuck up what they had is yet to come, but for the sake of Gabby, Dutch and his kids I hope that it can all be sorted out...peacefully. Thanks for the feedback love!
Just started reading it. I like it already. Next update?
Thanks love, I’ll more than likely be updating tonight ^.^
I like Dutchess and Nami relationship, they kind of balance each other out. And I don't like how they just beat up Beau, where were his boys. They should've got handled too especially Boogz.
They do balance each other out a bit, but I’m not sure it’ll always be that way. It’s always quiet before a storm, but for now Dutch and Nami are a go. When Beau got jumped he was in Dutch’s room alone, Jay hadn’t even gotten to the hospital yet and Boogz' stupid ass was somewhere sleeping his alcohol off. Thanks for the feedback love, I appreciate it!
Nami....girl, the fuck? Now I think she's dead ass wrong, but tell me how you guys feel? You think Autumn knew what was really up? Dutch and Nas? Chile what's going on there, that nigga is acting like he's catching feelings. Could he be or is he reading too much into it? You tell me, check out Ch.3 pts 1 & 2 below,
Ch. 3 Pt. 1 | Noncompliance
Ch. 3 Pt. 2| Disrespectful Compliance
Girl where are you!? I need this update.
Hey love I'm back! My man and I took a mini vacay for a few days and I only took my ipad so I couldn't type like I wanted to. I will be updating tonight though. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
If August ever give me that look, we fucking right then and there.
He could just breathe and I’d cream my pants.