I saw your fic “What’s that smell” and thought it was absolutely beautiful! I was wondering what would be the rest of the batches reactions to the new smells. I can’t imagine what their ship would smell like and then having it change and maybe even be cleaner. You’re the best! Xx
Their ship would 100% smell like oil, sweat, blaster residue, old caf, dusty armor polish, and wet dog on a good day.
Here is what I believe the rest of the batches reactions are.
The first time he notices it, he’s practically scowling.
He hates things he can’t immediately explain, and suddenly the ship doesn’t smell like burnt wiring and recycled air anymore — it smells like…
something soft.
Something warm.
Something he can’t stop breathing in.
He’s so annoyed about it he follows you around for an entire day, sniffing the air like a pissed-off lothcat, trying to figure out if it’s you or if someone installed a karking air freshener.
When he finally realizes it’s you, he just stands there staring at you for a long second, lips pressed into a tight line.
Then he mutters:
“You smell… distracting.”
Like it’s a personal insult.
Will absolutely lean in closer than necessary just to breathe you in — but if you catch him, he’ll immediately go “Hmph” and pretend you’re the weird one.
Wrecker’s the first to flat-out say it.
He scoops you up into a bone-crushing hug one day, immediately sniffs, and then pulls back with wide, amazed eyes.
“Whoa! You smell amazing! Like… like sunshine! And pastries! And soap!”
He is obsessed after that. Every time you walk by, he inhales dramatically like a toddler discovering their favorite candy.
“Can we keep ya?” he jokes — but he means it. You’re like a walking comfort blanket for him.
The Marauder slowly starts smelling better too because Wrecker starts cleaning more — purely because he wants the nice smell to stick around.
Tech notices immediately, but being Tech, he processes it differently.
“Interesting,” he says aloud the first time you pass him. “The olfactory change is quite pleasant.”
Then he starts… researching it.
He runs calculations about human pheromones and attraction rates. He theorizes that your presence might lower the crew’s stress levels by up to 23%.
He doesn’t even realize he’s orbiting closer to you during missions until Wrecker points it out.
Embarrassed, he adjusts his goggles and mutters something about “optimal proximity for psychological benefits.”
Translation: You smell good and it’s making his brain short-circuit, help.
Echo notices it like a punch to the face because he’s so hyperaware of sensory input now.
The Marauder always smells like metal and grime — he’s used to it — but you?
You smell like rain hitting dry ground. Like something clean and alive and real.
It shakes him a little.
Reminds him of before — before the war, before everything.
He tries to be subtle about it, but you catch him lingering near you sometimes, jaw tight like he’s trying not to let himself want it.
One day you brush past him and he closes his eyes for half a second, just breathing you in.
He doesn’t say anything about it for a long time.
Until maybe you tease him — and he finally admits, voice low and rough:
“You make this whole ship feel… less like a graveyard.”
Which might be the most devastatingly sweet thing Echo could ever say.
Hi! I hope this ok but I was wondering if you could do a spicy fic with Tech, maybe he gets flustered whenever she’s near and his brothers try to help by getting you do stuff and help him.
Hope you have a great weekend!
Tech x Reader
Tech was a genius—analytical, composed, articulate.
Until you walked into a room.
You’d joined the Bad Batch on a temporary mission as a communications specialist. The job should have been straightforward. Decode enemy transmissions, secure Republic relays, leave. What you hadn’t planned for was the quiet, bespectacled clone who dropped his hydrospanner every time you got too close.
You leaned over the console, fingers flying across the keypad as you rerouted the relay node Tech had said was “performing with suboptimal efficiency.” You were deep into the override sequence when a clatter behind you made you jump.
Clank.
Tech’s hydrospanner had hit the floor. Again.
You turned, brows raised. “You okay there, Tech?”
He cleared his throat, pushing his goggles up the bridge of his nose as he bent down awkwardly to retrieve the tool. “Yes. Quite. Merely dropped it due to… a temporary lapse in grip strength.”
Hunter’s voice echoed from the cockpit. “More like a temporary lapse in brain function. That’s the fourth time today.”
You smirked and returned to the console. Tech didn’t reply.
⸻
You sat beside Omega, poking at your rations. Tech was on the far end of the table, clearly trying not to look your way while also tracking your every move like a nervous datapad with legs.
“You know,” Omega said loudly, “Tech said he wants help cleaning the data arrays in the cockpit. He said you’re the only one who knows how to handle them.”
Your brow arched. “He did?”
At the other end of the table, Tech choked on his food.
Echo smirked. “Pretty sure that’s not what he said, Omega.”
“It is,” she insisted with wide, innocent eyes. “I asked him who he’d want help from, and he said her name first.”
Wrecker grinned. “And then he blushed!”
“I did not,” Tech muttered, voice strangled.
You bit back a grin. “Well, I am good with arrays…”
Hunter looked at Tech, then at you, then back at his food like it was the most fascinating thing in the galaxy.
⸻
You found Tech alone at the terminal, his fingers flying over the keys. You stepped up beside him, arms brushing.
He froze mid-keystroke.
“I figured I’d help with the arrays,” you said, voice low, letting your hand rest against the console a little closer than necessary. “Since you said I was the best candidate.”
His ears turned red. “That was… an extrapolated hypothetical. I did not anticipate you would take Omega’s report so… literally.”
You leaned in, letting your shoulder press against his. “Is that going to be a problem?”
He inhaled sharply. “I—no. Not at all.”
You brushed your fingers along the edge of the screen, pretending to study the data. “Because I don’t mind helping you, Tech. I actually like working close to you. You’re… brilliant. Kind of cute when you’re flustered, too.”
He blinked behind his goggles. “I—um—I do not often receive comments of that nature—cute, I mean. That is to say—thank you.”
His fingers twitched nervously. You reached over to rest your hand over his.
“You’re welcome. And if you ever want to drop your hydrospanner again to get my attention, Tech, just say something next time.”
“…I’ll keep that in mind.”
⸻
Wrecker, Omega, and Echo crouched behind a supply crate, straining to hear.
“Did she touch his hand?” Omega whispered excitedly.
“Pretty sure she did more than that,” Echo muttered.
Wrecker pumped a fist in the air. “I told you! Get her close enough and boom—Tech-meltdown!”
They high-fived, right before the door to the cockpit opened and you walked out.
You stopped.
They froze.
“…Were you all spying?”
“Uh,” Omega said.
Echo cleared his throat. “More like… observing.”
“Scientific purposes,” Wrecker added. “Real important stuff.”
You rolled your eyes and walked away—but you didn’t miss the grin Echo gave Tech as he slipped inside the cockpit next.
“You owe me ten credits.”
Tech pushed his goggles up. “Worth every credit.”
hi!! I adored your recent tech fic “more than calculations” abd was wondering if I could request something between tech and a reader who doesn’t flirt or do all the romance things kind of how tech is? I love the idea of them having the same way of showing each other love and they just understand each other even if others don’t really understand how they are together! I hope that made a bit of sense 🙈🩷 thank you!! 💗
Tech x Reader
“Are you two… together?”
Omega blinked up at you, head tilted with that signature mix of innocent curiosity and surgical precision, like she was investigating the oddities of adult behavior again.
Tech glanced up from his datapad, not the least bit ruffled. You didn’t look away from the gear you were calibrating, either. A beat passed.
“Yes,” you both said in perfect unison.
Omega squinted, unconvinced.
“But you don’t do anything!” she exclaimed, arms flailing slightly. “No hand-holding, no kissing, no—ugh—staring at each other like Wrecker and that woman from the food stalls!”
You shrugged. “We fixed the water pump system together last night. That was plenty.”
Tech nodded. “And we enjoy our shared quiet time between 2100 and 2130 hours. Typically on the cliffside bench.”
Omega made a face. “That’s it?”
“That is a significant amount of bonding,” Tech replied, tapping at his datapad. “Just because it doesn’t conform to more overt romantic displays does not mean the bond is any less valid.”
You added, without looking up, “We don’t need to prove anything.”
Omega grumbled and wandered off, muttering something about how weird grownups were. You smirked faintly.
When the datapad made a soft chime, Tech turned it toward you. It was a thermal reading—your shared analysis project on the geothermal vents near the northern cliffs.
“You were correct,” he said, adjusting his goggles. “There is a secondary vent system. I suspect it branches beneath the island’s reef shelf.”
You leaned closer to the screen. “Nice. That’ll stabilize the water temps around the farms. You wanna go check it out?”
“Affirmative,” he said. Then, after a pause: “I enjoy when we do these things together.”
You looked up at him and nodded, your version of “I do too.”
The two of you set out across Pabu, walking in companionable silence. You didn’t talk much. You didn’t have to. There was a rhythm, an ease to your presence beside each other. When you handed Tech a scanner without being asked, or when he adjusted your toolbelt with a small, thoughtful flick of his fingers — that was your version of affection.
Sometimes, Wrecker would nudge Crosshair (visiting, grumbling, but always watching) and whisper, “How do they even like each other?”
Crosshair would reply, “They don’t need to. They get each other.”
Later, the sun dipped low, casting warm gold across the cliffs. You and Tech sat side by side on your usual bench. No words. Just a datapad between you, exchanging quiet theories, occasionally pointing at the sea when a bird swooped or a current shifted strangely.
Tech finally broke the silence.
“Most people… expect something different from a relationship. More expression. More effort.”
You looked at him. “This is effort. Just a different kind.”
His lips curled slightly at the edge — his version of a full grin.
“I concur.”
After a moment, he added, “You are the first person I’ve encountered who does not require translation of my silence.”
You gave a small smile and leaned just enough to bump your shoulder against his. “And you’re the first person who doesn’t expect me to say things I don’t feel like saying out loud.”
He reached over and adjusted your sleeve where it had folded weirdly. Not romantic. Not flashy. Just… quietly right.
Behind you, somewhere near the beach, Omega was laughing, chasing a crab and antagonising Crosshair.
But here, in this quiet little corner of peace, you and Tech sat in absolute understanding.
No need to explain. No need to perform. Just existing.
Exactly as you were.
Exactly together.
Yeah you could say I’m doing numbers on tumblr. And that numbers? One
Captain Rex x Reader X Commander Bacara
Christophis shimmered beneath a cold midday sun. The siege held steady for now, but you knew what the silence meant—another droid push was coming.
You stood outside the Republic command center as the wind curled through the crystal-laced streets, arms crossed over your chest as General Kenobi stepped beside you.
“You’re tense,” Obi-Wan said mildly, hands clasped behind his back.
“I’m Jedi,” you replied. “Tense is the brand.”
He chuckled softly. “You sound more like your former Master every day.”
You side-eyed him. “Don’t insult me.”
Kenobi smiled, and the two of you shared a brief, familiar quiet. He was warmth where Mace was fire. Less demanding, more wry. But you never doubted his strength.
He gestured for you to follow him back inside. “Cody and Rex have uncovered something troubling.”
⸻
Inside the war room, the holomap flickered with overlapping reports of enemy troop movements—ones the Separatists shouldn’t have been able to predict.
Cody looked up. “We’ve been compromised.”
You frowned, stepping beside Rex. “Hacked?”
“Worse,” Rex muttered, jaw tight. “Someone inside fed the droids our plans.”
Kenobi’s brow furrowed. “You’re certain?”
“We checked the comms logs, troop assignments. It had to be someone in the barracks,” Cody said.
You exchanged a glance with Rex.
“This wasn’t a droid slicing into our systems,” you said. “This was betrayal.”
Obi-Wan and Anakin headed out shortly after—to track down Ventress, whom they suspected had made direct contact with the traitor. You watched them vanish over the ridge, then turned back toward the barracks.
Cody nodded to Rex. “We do this quiet.”
You, Rex, and Cody questioned each of the troopers in the unit, keeping it routine. Nothing tipped you off—until Rex noticed something Slick had said.
Cody turned to you, “General,” he said, furious, “he knew the layout. Accessed the codes. Blasted his own squad’s quarters to cover his tracks.”
The rest came fast—tracking him to the weapons depot, where he’d set explosives to destroy Republic munitions.
Slick ranted as Cody and Rex finally brought him down. You stood at the edge, watching the aftermath, pulse still hammering.
“I was freeing myself!” Slick yelled. “We’re slaves—bred for war, thrown into battles without choice. You’re all too blind to see it!”
“You betrayed brothers,” Rex bit out. “Not just orders. Us.”
You didn’t speak. You couldn’t—not right then. You looked to Cody, who was already organizing a sweep of remaining supply caches.
“Reinforce the northern sector,” you told Rex, your voice steady. “We can’t let them think this rattled us.”
“Yes, General.”
He started to move, but paused. “Do you think he was right?”
You looked at him, really looked.
“No,” you said quietly. “You aren’t slaves. You’re soldiers. But that doesn’t mean the Republic treats you right.”
A small flicker passed over his face—something like surprise. And something else beneath it.
Respect.
You didn’t linger. You turned back to the ruined depot and the traitor being dragged away.
But the next time Rex looked at you, it was different.
⸻
The air over Christophis was charged with static and tension—thick enough to choke on. The Separatists had dug in deeper, the front line stretching like a fraying wire. Crystal shards and smoldering wreckage dotted the skyline.
You stood atop the forward command platform beside Rex and Anakin, squinting through macrobinoculars as waves of droids advanced, relentless.
“Cody’s holding the right flank,” Rex reported. “But not for long.”
Anakin shifted beside you. “Then we take the pressure off.”
You lowered the binocs, nodding. “We push up the main thoroughfare. Hard and fast. Break their rhythm.”
Rex gave a short nod. “I’ll get the men ready.”
As he turned, Anakin glanced sideways at you. “Not bad, General. Starting to think you’re enjoying our messes.”
“I was trained by Windu. Messes are my baseline,” you said, arching a brow.
Anakin grinned. “You ever get tired of being reassigned?”
You opened your mouth to answer—but the sudden thrum of a descending transport drew your attention skyward. A Jedi cruiser broke the cloudline, dropping a low-altitude shuttle near your position.
A moment later, the boarding ramp hissed open—and out strode a young Togruta girl with fire in her stride and determination on her face.
“Jedi reinforcements?” Rex asked, squinting.
You stepped forward as she approached. “She’s just a kid…”
“I’m not ‘just a kid,’” the girl interrupted, planting herself in front of you and Anakin. “I’m Ahsoka Tano. Jedi Padawan. Assigned by Master Yoda.”
Anakin blinked. “Assigned to who?”
“To you,” Ahsoka replied, chin lifted proudly. “Master Skywalker.”
You looked between them, watching the shock play across Anakin’s face, and bit back a smile.
“Well,” you said quietly, “have fun with that.”
But Ahsoka wasn’t done. She turned to you next, eyes bright with news.
“And you, General,” she added. “I have orders for your redeployment. The Council needs you on Jabiim.”
Your heart skipped.
Jabiim.
The mud planet. The fractured native clans. The ghosts.
“I served there as a Padawan,” you said. “Years ago.”
Ahsoka nodded. “The Council said your connection with the local resistance could help rebuild diplomacy. They’re trying to avoid civilian casualties. You will be aiding Master Mundi and his men”
You didn’t answer right away. The weight of it pressed into your chest—not just another mission. Not just more fighting.
But Bacara.
And Mundi.
Anakin folded his arms, expression darkening. “You just got here. They’re moving you again?”
You glanced at him. “It’s war, Skywalker.”
He shook his head. “It’s bad planning.”
Rex was quiet beside you, unreadable behind his helmet.
You finally turned to him. “You’ve got good people, Captain. You’ll win this without me.”
He hesitated for the briefest beat before nodding. “Safe travels, General.”
You turned back toward the shuttle, Ahsoka falling into step beside you. “They’re expecting you to land by nightfall.”
“And I expect to be muddy by morning,” you muttered.
You didn’t look back.
But you felt it—that unmistakable flicker of attachment. The way a battlefront had started to feel like home. The way one quiet, steady clone had started to make you hesitate before stepping onto a ship.
You swallowed it.
And walked away.
⸻
The rain on Jabiim hadn’t changed.
It greeted you like an old foe—relentless, icy, and soaking through every layer of your robes before you even stepped off the gunship. The scent of wet metal and rot filled your lungs, the familiar churn of mud underfoot as clone boots squelched around you.
You blinked against the downpour, lifting your hood as a group of Jabiimi locals approached. Dressed in patchwork armor and soaked tunics, they looked rougher than you remembered—but their leader, a grizzled woman with salt-and-pepper braids, smiled the moment she saw you.
“Jedi!” she called out. “I didn’t believe it when they said it was you.”
You moved forward and clasped her arm, shoulder to shoulder in the Jabiimi way. “Reya. Still not dead?”
“Disappointed?” she asked with a sharp grin.
“Honestly, yeah. I was sure you’d be the one to get pancaked by an AT-TE trying to punch it.”
She barked a laugh, and a few of her men chuckled behind her. The rain ran down your face, but you didn’t care—not here.
“Still the same sharp tongue,” Reya said. “But older. Heavier.”
You looked toward the ridgelines beyond the base, where smoke curled from recent skirmishes.
“We all are.”
⸻
The command tent was warm in comparison, though the heat came mostly from tension.
Master Ki-Adi-Mundi was hunched over a holomap, his long fingers tapping as he scrolled through topography. Bacara stood at his side, arms folded, helmet tucked beneath one arm. He glanced up as you entered—and then promptly looked away.
“General,” Mundi greeted without looking up. “Your arrival was later than expected.”
You raised a brow. “Nice to see you too, Master Mundi. The diplomatic welcome from the Jabiimi slowed us down.”
“They do have a flair for unnecessary tradition,” he replied, dry as bone.
You stifled a sigh and stepped closer. “They trust me. That’ll matter when this turns ugly.”
Mundi didn’t argue—but didn’t agree either.
Instead, he gestured toward the glowing red marks on the map. “Separatist forces have split across the valley. We’ll need a two-pronged advance.”
You exchanged a brief glance with Bacara. “I assume I’m taking one side?”
“Yes,” Mundi said. “And Commander Bacara will accompany you.”
You didn’t miss the subtle way Bacara’s jaw shifted.
Later, outside the command tent, the rain had lightened to a misty drizzle. You and Bacara walked in silence through the makeshift perimeter. Troopers moved past, saluting. The mud clung to everything.
“You’re quiet,” you finally said, side-eyeing him. “More than usual.”
“I prefer action to small talk,” he replied, eyes scanning the treeline.
You folded your arms, then smirked. “Well. I’d try to get you to like me, but it’s clear you already hate Master Mundi more.”
For the first time since you’d arrived, Bacara blinked—and something flickered across his face. A twitch of the mouth. Maybe even a grin. You weren’t sure. But it was enough.
“He’s… not ideal,” Bacara said at last.
You raised a brow. “That was practically gossip. Careful, Commander.”
He didn’t respond, but the tension between you had eased. Slightly.
You stepped up beside him. “You don’t have to like me. But we fight better when we understand each other.”
“I understand you fine, General,” Bacara said, looking forward. “You don’t like being told what to do. You take risks. You talk too much.”
You hummed. “And yet, somehow, you haven’t shot me.”
“There’s still time.”
The ghost of a smirk tugged at your lips as you looked out across the field. Rain still fell. The mud still swallowed boots whole. But something was shifting. Just a little.
You’d crack his armor eventually.
One way or another.
⸻
The dawn on Jabiim was little more than a pale bruise behind stormclouds.
Visibility was poor. The mist clung to the ground like a second skin. The entire platoon moved like wraiths over the muddy terrain, their white armor dulled with grime. Bacara led the charge, as always, silent and swift. You followed at his flank, your saber unlit for now, your mind scanning for movement through the Force.
This mission was simple: flush out a Separatist munitions outpost built into the cliffs east of the valley before reinforcements arrived. Quiet, fast, sharp. That was Bacara’s way.
And there had been no room for questioning it.
He hadn’t assigned you anything. He’d informed you. “You’ll be on overwatch. Do not break formation unless ordered,” he’d said back at camp, his voice clipped and precise. “This is not a Jedi operation. This is military execution.”
You weren’t used to being spoken to like a cadet.
As you crested the final ridge, you crouched next to Bacara. He was scanning the outpost below, HUD flickering, speaking quietly into his comm to his men.
“Squad A—flank left. Squad B, take high ground on that outcrop. We breach in five.”
You watched him for a beat, then leaned close.
“Got a plan for the anti-armor cannons on the eastern side?”
He didn’t look at you. “They’ll be dealt with.”
“Your definition of ‘dealt with’ usually involves body bags.”
Bacara finally turned, visor gleaming. “My definition of ‘dealt with’ ends with mission success. You’re on overwatch, remember?”
You exhaled slowly, not wanting to escalate. “I’m trying to work with you, Commander. If you’d communicate—”
“Trust is earned, not given,” he said sharply. “And so far, all I’ve seen is impulsiveness, disobedience, and sentimentality.”
You stared at him, something sharp catching behind your ribs.
“I save lives,” you said. “You bury them.”
Bacara’s tone went cold. “And yet, you’re here. Assigned to my unit. That should tell you something.”
He turned without another word, barking orders to his troops as they began moving into position.
⸻
The assault was brutal.
Explosives lit up the fog, and Separatist fire screamed through the air. Bacara’s unit moved with terrifying coordination—drilled to perfection, ruthless in their advance. You provided support, covering fire, strategic pushes—but nothing too visible. Bacara didn’t want theatrics. He wanted precision.
It worked.
By the time you moved into the outpost interior, only a few scattered droids remained. You slashed through them with clean sweeps, the hiss of your saber illuminating the narrow halls.
But something still sat sour in your gut.
Back at camp, you wiped grime from your face and walked straight into the makeshift command tent where Bacara was debriefing.
“You reassigned Trooper Kixan.”
Bacara didn’t look up from his datapad. “Yes.”
“He saved three men today,” you said, stepping in. “Took a blaster bolt to the shoulder and kept moving. He’s loyal. Smart. Brave.”
“And slow. His reaction time compromised the left flank. He will be reassigned to support detail under a different unit.”
You stared at him. “You can’t treat them like parts, Bacara.”
“I don’t, General,” he replied, eyes finally lifting to meet yours. “I treat them like soldiers. And I do not have room for anything less than excellence.”
Something cold lodged in your throat. “You’re going to push them until they break.”
“They were bred for this,” he said flatly. “If they break, they weren’t made for war.”
You hated how calm he sounded. You hated how efficient he was. You hated how much it reminded you of everything Mace warned you about when Jedi strayed too far into command and left their compassion behind.
You turned to leave, stopping just at the tent flap.
“I thought Mundi was the hardest man in this battalion to like,” you said, not looking back. “But congratulations. You’re winning.”
⸻
The storm had broken sometime after midnight. Rain battered the tents with rhythmic violence, and the air carried that sharp, post-battle scent: metal, ozone, blood.
You couldn’t sleep.
Your boots sank into the sludge outside your tent as you paced, the glow of the communicator clenched in your hand like it could anchor you.
You stood still beneath the overhang of a comms tower and keyed in the encryption sequence. The signal buzzed—delayed, flickering—and for a heartbeat, you thought it wouldn’t connect.
Then, Master Windu’s image shimmered to life, projected in pale blue above your comm.
“[Y/N],” he said, voice like gravel smoothed by a river. His expression was unreadable, but his shoulders relaxed the slightest bit. “You’re up late. I assume this isn’t a scheduled update.”
You scoffed. “No. This is a tactical emergency.”
Mace didn’t react. “You’re bleeding?”
“Emotionally,” you said, dryly. “From the brain. And the soul.”
He stared. “Explain.”
You leaned in like you were about to spill secrets forbidden by the Code. “Master, I swear, if I spend one more minute on this cold, miserable rock with Commander Iceblock and High Council Saint Arrogance, I’m going to lose my mind.”
Mace blinked slowly. “I take it you’re referring to Bacara and Master Mundi.”
“Who else would I be referring to?! One of them speaks like he’s permanently inhaled a blaster cartridge and the other talks to me like I’m still a youngling who can’t lift a cup without supervision!”
Mace’s brow twitched slightly. “You are still young.”
You pointed a stern finger at the holocomm. “Don’t do that. Don’t Jedi me. This is a venting call, Master.”
“I gathered.”
You slumped back in the chair, groaning. “Bacara reassigns clones like they’re sabacc cards. He told me I was ‘failing to meet operational discipline standards.’ What does that mean?! I beat his training droid record last month!”
“You are… not a standard Jedi.”
“I’m not even sure he likes Jedi. And Mundi just nods at everything he does like they’re some cold, creepy war hive mind! At least you used to tell me when I was being annoying. They just silently judge me like two frostbitten gargoyles!”
There was a long pause. You half expected Mace to give you a lecture. Instead, his voice was low. “You’re frustrated. That’s not wrong. What do you want from them?”
You sighed, all the energy draining out of you. “I don’t know. Respect? Trust? Maybe a little acknowledgment that I know what I’m doing?”
Mace’s eyes softened ever so slightly. “You want them to see you the way I do.”
You didn’t answer right away. But yeah—maybe.
“I can’t make them see it,” Mace continued. “But I can remind you that you’ve earned everything that put you where you are. Don’t twist yourself into someone else to win their approval.”
You smiled faintly. “Not even for peace and quiet?”
“Especially not for that. You’ve never been quiet.”
You laughed, resting your chin in your hand. “I miss Coruscant.”
“I miss not having to take comm calls at two in the morning.”
You beamed. “But you still answered.”
His mouth twitched. “Always.”
You grinned, wide and unapologetic.
“Get some sleep,” he said, his tone softening. “You’ll outlast them both.”
“I’ll try. Thanks, Master.”
The transmission ended, and for the first time in days, you felt like your balance had returned.
⸻
The frost crunched beneath your boots, thin white cracking like old bone as you followed the squad through the craggy ravine. The sky above was overcast—grey, as always—and your breath fogged with every exhale.
It was the first coordinated mission with just you, Bacara, and the squad. No Ki-Adi-Mundi. No diplomacy. Just a recon op on the edge of hostile territory. Quiet. Tense. Frozen.
You liked the clones. Most of them, anyway. Kixan—freshly reassigned—offered you a small nod as you passed. You gave him one back.
Bacara hadn’t spoken to you directly since the debrief.
You didn’t know why it irked you so much. He was never exactly chatty—but there was something pointed about his silence now. And it was beginning to wear on your nerves.
You kept pace beside him anyway, trudging over uneven rock as the squad spread out behind you.
“Terrain levels off another two klicks ahead,” you said. “If we angle the scan here, we can avoid the ridge entirely and still get clean readings.”
He said nothing.
You blinked. “That wasn’t a suggestion. That was a tactical note.”
“I heard you,” he muttered, gruff and unreadable.
You narrowed your eyes. “Did I do something to upset you, Commander?”
There was a beat. He didn’t look at you. “No.”
Liar.
You frowned, your hand brushing the hilt of your saber. “Okay. So it’s just me. Got it.”
“Don’t start something mid-mission,” he snapped. Not loud—but sharp enough to cut.
Your nostrils flared. “You’re not my master, Bacara.”
“No. But I am your commander on this op. And your opinion of me has been made… abundantly clear.”
You froze mid-step. “What?”
“Don’t worry. I didn’t hear all of your conversation with Master Windu,” he said, voice low. “Just enough.”
Oh no.
Your mouth opened—and closed. You felt your stomach twist.
“How much is ‘enough’?”
“‘Emotionally bleeding from the soul,’” he quoted flatly.
Maker.
You looked away, feeling the heat rise to your cheeks despite the cold. “You were spying.”
“I was passing the comm tent.”
You made a sound that was somewhere between a groan and a swear. “Fine. Look—maybe I vented. A little. But you were being impossible.”
You made a sound that was somewhere between a groan and a swear. “Fine. Look—maybe I vented. A little. But you were being impossible.”
“I was doing my job.”
“At what cost?”
Bacara stopped. You nearly walked into him.
He turned to you fully, expression unreadable behind the harsh lines of his helmet. “I don’t have the luxury of trial and error, General. I don’t get to make emotional calls and hope they work out.”
You swallowed. “You think I do?”
He didn’t answer.
You took a step forward, eyes locked on him. “I feel things. That’s not a weakness. And maybe I complain. Maybe I rant. But I’ve never abandoned the mission. I’m here. I’m fighting. Same as you.”
There was a moment—a flicker of something in his stance. Tension. Conflict. Maybe even a touch of guilt.
“I don’t dislike you,” he said finally.
You blinked. “You’ve got a strange way of showing it.”
A silence stretched between you.
He added, quietly, “I dislike Mundi more.”
You snorted before you could help it. “Well, now you’re just trying to flatter me.”
“No,” he said dryly. “That’s not what that was.”
And just like that, a crack formed in the durasteel.
Not enough to change everything.
But enough to start.
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The wind came down from the northern slopes in sharp, whispering currents, cutting through every seam of your robes. The battle might have been quiet today, but the land was still loud—with frost, with silence, with the kind of stillness that meant something was always waiting.
You sat cross-legged near the squad’s makeshift fire, arms wrapped around your knees, watching embers dance. The clones had begun to relax, little by little. Helmets off. Gloves loosened. There was even the soft clink of a thermal flask being passed around.
Bacara hadn’t joined them yet. He stood off a few meters, half-silhouetted in the dark, arms folded, visor turned toward the stars—or the silence. You couldn’t tell.
You didn’t press him.
Instead, you looked at the men.
Gunner was talking with Varn, low-voiced but animated. Kixan nodded along, his smile tired but real. Even Tekk, the quietest of them, had cracked a dry comment earlier that got a snort from the group. You liked seeing them like this. Human.
You passed your own ration tin to Kixan and leaned back, letting the heat of the fire work on your frozen spine.
And then Master Mundi joined the circle.
He sat down with the composure of a politician, robes perfectly arranged despite the mud at the hem. He gave a slight nod to the men, then turned his attention to you.
“General,” he said. “It is good to see you integrating with the unit.”
You arched a brow. “They’re good men. Not hard to like.”
He gave one of his tight, unreadable smiles. “Affection must never cloud judgment. Familiarity breeds attachment. Attachment clouds the Force.”
There it was.
You smiled, tight-lipped. “I’m aware of the Code, Master.”
“I’m sure you are,” he said mildly, but it still grated. Like you were a student again. Like the weight of your lightsaber and the stripes on your armor didn’t mean anything.
The silence that followed was awkward—until Gunner coughed and redirected with a story about a wild nexu they’d seen in a jungle op once. The others followed his lead.
You joined in too—offering a few memories from a chaotic campaign with the 501st that involved a collapsed bridge, a flock of angry bird-lizards, and Anakin Skywalker daring a clone to drink glowing fruit juice.
That got real laughs.
Even Tekk chuckled, and Varn snorted loud enough to attract Bacara’s attention. The commander lingered, glanced at the fire, then slowly made his way over.
You noticed. So did the men.
He didn’t sit, but he stayed. Close enough to hear. Close enough to be seen.
That was something.
And then, quietly, Gunner passed him the flask.
Bacara hesitated—just for a moment—then took it. No words. Just a nod. But the men noticed. So did you.
The conversation rolled on. Light. Easy. Full of battle scars and ridiculous injuries and even a poor attempt at singing a Republic marching song. The cold wasn’t gone—but it felt distant now. Dull.
You met Bacara’s eyes briefly through his helmet, and offered a small, genuine smile.
He didn’t return it.
But he didn’t look away, either.
And somehow, that was enough.
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The war was never really over—not on Coruscant, and certainly not in your head. But the campaign was.
The treaty was signed, the separatist stronghold had been dismantled, and the native leadership, thanks to your careful negotiations, had agreed to provide intelligence and safe passage for the Republic.
It was a hard-won, smoke-stained victory. You’d survived. So had the squad. Even Bacara.
Back on Coruscant, the base was bustling with returning battalions. Steel corridors echoed with familiar voices and heavy boots, but everything felt strangely muffled to you. It always did after a long campaign. Like you were half out of your body, trailing somewhere between systems and decisions you couldn’t take back.
You were exiting the debriefing chambers when you heard the voice—steady, familiar, a little softer than usual.
“General.”
You turned—too fast.
Rex stood there in casual gear, one hand loosely on his belt, the other behind his back. He wasn’t wearing his helmet, which meant you got the full impact of that steady, level gaze and the faint smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes.
Standing just behind him was Ahsoka Tano, arms crossed, an amused but knowing expression on her face.
“Well, look who made it back in one piece,” you said, heart lurching before you could stop it.
Rex nodded. “Didn’t doubt you would, General.”
You walked toward them, easing into the reunion like slipping into an old coat. Comfortable. Familiar. Too comfortable?
Ahsoka stepped forward first. “You smell like three weeks of burned jungle and bad rations.”
You snorted. “It was three weeks of bad rations, but certainly wasn’t burned jungles.”
She grinned, then leaned in to give you a quick hug. “Welcome back.”
You were about to respond when you felt it—eyes. On your back.
You turned, just slightly, and saw Bacara in the distance, halfway across the hangar bay. Still in full armor, helmet under his arm, face unreadable.
He didn’t approach. Just… watched.
You blinked, heart thudding a little too loud in your chest, then turned back to Rex—and that’s when you saw it.
A tiny shift. A twitch of his jaw. The faintest flicker in his expression.
You weren’t sure what it meant.
But Ahsoka did.
She looked between the two of you, her brow furrowing slightly as she took a half-step back and crossed her arms again. Observing.
“Commander Bacara?” Rex asked, casual in tone, but not in his eyes.
“Yeah,” you said. “We worked… closely this campaign.”
Rex gave a small nod, then glanced over your shoulder briefly. “He doesn’t look thrilled.”
You didn’t answer right away.
Ahsoka did, though. “Neither do you.”
The silence that followed was tight.
You tried to lighten it. “You’re both just mad I didn’t die out there.”
Rex gave a thin smile. “Not mad, General. Just surprised.”
That one stung. Not because it was harsh—because it wasn’t. It was honest. And distant. And something you couldn’t quite read.
Before you could say anything else, a summons crackled over your comlink—Council debriefing.
“Guess I’m wanted,” you said, already backing away.
You turned and started walking. You didn’t look back.
But you could feel two sets of eyes watching you go.
One like a shadow. The other like a tether you weren’t sure you could still follow.
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(A/N, I had to make up a few clone ocs as I could not find one clone name for the Galactic Marines)
Has this been done yet
Scorch should be 100% silly but the man who cracks most jokes something something
Inspired by @minosprimeenjoyer's command batch version
Omg! I saw you take requests! I love your work especially bad batch! I was thinking a Hunter x Fem!Reader where the reader is new to the ship, like medic or maybe even a soldier? But she uses like perfumes and obviously a different soap and he’s obsessed with trying to figure out what she smells like and with how nice it smells? You’re amazing! :))
Absolutely - sometimes I run out of ideas so love getting request! I hope you like it x
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The Marauder had always smelled like metal, boot polish, and testosterone. Maybe a little like burnt caf on bad days. It wasn’t bad—it was just what Hunter was used to. Predictable. Familiar.
Until you showed up.
Fresh off an assignment with a battalion on Christophis, you were the newest addition to Clone Force 99—medic, technically, but you could hold your own in a fight too. The regs had spoken highly of your skills. That’s all Hunter needed to approve the transfer.
What he hadn’t anticipated was you.
Not your skills, not your sharp tongue or how fast you could stitch a man back together mid-firefight.
No, what Hunter hadn’t anticipated—what was currently driving him up the kriffing wall—was how good you smelled.
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It started on the first day.
You’d walked up the ramp in your gear, throwing a satchel over your shoulder, hair pulled back, confidence in your step. The moment you passed him, it hit Hunter like a punch to the senses.
Sweet. Warm. Not too strong. Not floral, not fruity. Something clean. Something… familiar but elusive. He couldn’t place it.
His head had snapped toward you like a damn hound on instinct.
You hadn’t noticed—too busy joking with Tech about the medbay setup.
Hunter had clenched his jaw and focused. Or tried to. You walked past him again and—there it was. A whisper of something rich and soft. Stars, what was that?
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The next few days were worse.
Every time you were near, his senses lit up like a battle alert. The scent of your soap after a shower. The subtle perfume that lingered on your neck and collarbone when you leaned over the holotable. Even the way your gear smelled—fresh, clean, nothing like the usual musty armor worn too long.
Hunter could track someone through a jungle with a five-day head start, but your scent was all he could think about, and you were right there—constantly in his space, brushing shoulders, handing him bandages, laughing at something Wrecker said.
He was losing it.
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He caught you in the galley one night, the ship quiet, everyone else asleep.
You were perched on the counter in sleepwear and a hoodie, cradling a cup of caf like it held the secrets of the galaxy. The scent hit him again—stronger this time. No armor, no barrier. Just you, soft and warm and godsdamn intoxicating.
“You okay?” you asked, eyes flicking up to meet his.
Hunter blinked. “Yeah. Just… couldn’t sleep.”
You tilted your head. “Too much stimcaf or just the usual war trauma?”
He smirked. “Bit of both.”
You chuckled, then held out the cup. “Want some?”
He stepped forward—and nearly flinched when the scent hit him again. His jaw tightened.
“You good?” you asked, raising a brow.
“I, uh…” He cleared his throat. “Can I ask you something?”
“Sure.”
“What do you wear?”
You blinked. “Excuse me?”
Hunter rubbed the back of his neck, ears flushing. “I mean, you smell… different. Not in a bad way! Just… I can’t place it.”
You stared at him for a beat—then burst into laughter. “Is that what’s been bothering you?”
He scowled, only mildly embarrassed. “It’s been driving me nuts. I can’t figure it out.”
You hopped off the counter, still laughing, and came to stand close. Too close. He tensed when you leaned in just a little, tilting your head.
“It’s amber and sandalwood. Little bit of vanilla. And my soap’s just some fancy one I stole from an officer’s shower kit. Want me to make you a batch?”
Hunter’s brain short-circuited.
The scent was right there—intimate, surrounding him, and your voice was low, teasing.
“I—uh…” he stammered, then pulled back just slightly. “No. No, I think I’ll go insane if everything smells like you.”
You smiled slowly, eyes dark with amusement. “So… it’s a problem?”
He gave you a flat look. “Yes.”
You leaned in again, grinning. “Guess you’ll just have to get used to it, Sarge.”
Hunter’s voice was gravel. “That’s what I’m afraid of.”
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Hi! Your writing is superb and I love your fic with the reader and Crosshair bantering. Do you think you could do a Crosshair x Fem!reader where she finally gets him flustered and blushing? Maybe a bit of spice at the end if that’s ok? Xx
Crosshair x Fem!Reader
Warnings: No explicit smut, but it’s definitely mature
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Crosshair was used to being in control—of his aim, of his surroundings, of people. He liked it that way.
What he didn’t like was how you always had a retort ready for him, sharp as the toothpick between his teeth.
“Your stalking’s getting obvious, sharpshooter,” you drawled, slinging your rifle over your shoulder as he fell into step beside you. “Didn’t know you liked watching me walk that much.”
“I wasn’t watching you walk,” he muttered.
You raised an eyebrow. “So you were watching my ass. Got it.”
He glanced away, jaw tight, a faint flush creeping up his neck.
Score one.
“You’re lucky I’m into grumpy, brooding types who pretend they don’t care.”
“I don’t.”
“Mmhm,” you said, voice thick with amusement. “That why you always hover when I’m patching up, or growl when I flirt with other clones?”
He stopped walking. You didn’t. Not until he grabbed your wrist, tugging you back with just enough force to make it known he was done playing.
“I don’t growl.”
“Oh, honey,” you smirked, stepping in close. “You practically purr when you’re jealous.”
His eyes narrowed, but his pulse jumped beneath your fingertips. You hadn’t meant to touch his chest—but your hand was there now, and he wasn’t moving.
“Careful,” he warned, voice low.
You tilted your head. “Why? You gonna shoot me?”
“No. But I might do something you’ll like.”
You gave him a slow, wicked grin. “That’s the idea.”
And that’s when it happened—the blush. Subtle at first, just a dusting of pink across those high cheekbones. But you saw it. He knew you saw it.
“You’re blushing,” you whispered, grinning like you’d just landed a perfect headshot.
He scoffed. “It’s hot in here.”
“We’re on Hoth.”
Silence. You let it stretch. Delicious, victorious silence.
“…You gonna keep staring, or—”
You silenced him with a kiss—soft, heated, and just enough tongue to make his breath hitch. His hand gripped your waist in reflex, grounding, needing.
“You gonna let me keep talking like that,” you breathed against his lips, “or are you finally gonna shut me up properly?”
He backed you into the nearest wall faster than you could blink, lips crashing against yours harder this time, heat surging between you both like a live wire. When he pulled back, his voice was husky, feral.
“Be careful what you ask for.”
You smirked, heart hammering. “Right on target.”
The wall was cold at your back, but Crosshair was not.
His body pressed flush to yours, lean and strong, caging you in with one hand braced above your head and the other gripping your hip like you might slip through his fingers if he didn’t anchor you.
“You’ve got a real smart mouth,” he muttered, voice dark and ragged.
“I know,” you breathed, dragging your nails lightly down the front of his blacks. “You like it.”
He growled—a low, almost feral sound—then tilted your chin up with his gloved fingers and kissed you again. This time, there was no holding back. Teeth, tongue, heat. He kissed like he fought—focused, controlled, but with a dangerous edge that said he might snap.
You wanted him to snap.
Your fingers slipped beneath the hem of his shirt, dragging along the sharp dip of his waist. His abs flexed beneath your touch, and his breath caught.
“What’s wrong, Cross?” you purred, nipping at his jaw. “You usually have so much to say.”
“I’m busy shutting you up,” he rasped.
And oh—he did.
His hands were everywhere now, sliding up your thighs, gripping your hips, tugging you closer. You rolled your hips against his and felt just how not unaffected he was. The air between you grew hot, heavy, thick with need.
“You wanna keep teasing,” he whispered in your ear, breath hot against your skin, “I’ll make good on every threat I’ve ever made.”
Your eyes fluttered shut at the promise laced in his tone. He sounded dangerous. And you? You’d never wanted anything more.
“I dare you.”
He chuckled, low and rough, and it did something to you.
“You don’t know what you’re asking for.”
“Oh, I do,” you said, curling your fingers in his shirt and pulling him closer. “And I want all of it.”
He kissed you again, slower this time—possessive, claiming, his. His teeth grazed your bottom lip as he pulled away, eyes locked on yours, pupils blown wide with heat.
“Later,” he murmured, brushing his mouth over yours. “When we’re not seconds from being interrupted by someone like Wrecker.”
You groaned. “He would walk in right now.”
“Which is why,” he said, voice sharp and wicked, “you’re going to think about this all day until I do something about it.”
He stepped back, leaving you breathless, flushed, and absolutely wrecked.
And the smirk he shot you?
It said he knew exactly what he’d done.
stop talking about the USA. I have heard enough about that wretched place
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You opened the caf stand before the sun even touched the Senate dome.
It wasn't glamorous—just a small stall tucked between the barracks and the speeder lot, wedged beneath a half-broken overhang and decorated with hand-drawn signs and an ancient droid who beeped exactly once every hour. But it was yours. And more importantly, it was theirs. The clones. You made sure the caf was always hot, the chairs weren't falling apart, and that no one left without at least a bad pun or two.
Most troopers came and went in a rush, trading credits and comm chatter like it was a race. But he—he was different.
Commander Fox.
He never rushed. He never lingered either. Just strolled up every morning with the same unrelenting scowl and said, "Two shots. No sugar." Every time.
You gave him his usual. Every time.
And you always tried to get a rise out of him.
"Careful, Commander," you said one morning, handing him his cup. "Any more caf and you'll start running faster than a speeder on payday."
He stared at you. Deadpan. Sipped.
"That's not how physics works."
You grinned. "It is when you believe."
He didn't laugh, not even close. But the next day, he brought his own cup. It had a cartoon speeder drawn on it. You didn't say a word. Just smiled.
That's how it went.
You told jokes. He tolerated them. You talked about your broken chair, and he fixed it the next morning without a word. You mentioned you hadn't eaten, and a ration bar mysteriously showed up on the counter the next day. He never gave compliments. But he always came back.
And that said more than enough.
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One quiet evening, long after shift change, you were wiping down the counter when heavy footsteps approached.
You turned, surprised. "Commander? You're off-duty."
Fox crossed his arms. "You're still working."
"I run this place. I don't really clock out."
"Still shouldn't be alone out here this late."
You raised an eyebrow. "Are you worried about me, Fox?"
He looked away. "Coruscant's not always safe."
You bit back a smile. "No one's gonna mug the caf girl."
"I'm not worried about the girl," he muttered. "I'm worried about the idiot who tries it."
That one caught you off guard.
For a long moment, neither of you spoke.
Then, suddenly self-conscious, you busied your hands. "Want a cup?"
He hesitated. "Yeah."
You made it exactly the way he liked—two shots, no sugar—but you handed it over with a napkin this time. Scribbled on it, in your awful handwriting, was a cartoon of Fox with steam rising off his helmet and the words: "Too hot to handle."
He stared at it.
You braced yourself for a groan. A sigh. A disappointed head shake.
Instead, he folded the napkin neatly. Tucked it inside his chest plate. Like it mattered.
"You're ridiculous," he said.
"And you're still here."
He looked at you then—really looked. Like he was seeing you for the first time.
"I like the quiet," he said softly. "And the company."
Your breath hitched. The air between you shifted, warm and buzzing with something fragile.
You broke the moment with a smile. "Well, Commander. You keep showing up, and I might start thinking you like me."
"I wouldn't be here if I didn't."
That shut you up.
He took a sip. Nodded.
Then, as he turned to leave, he glanced back over his shoulder.
"Lock up early tonight."
You watched him disappear into the Coruscant haze, heart hammering.
And the next morning?
He came back.
Same time. Same cup.
But this time... he smiled.
Just barely.
But it was enough.
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It started like any other morning.
The usual rush of troopers streamed past, grabbing caf like their lives depended on it—which, for some of them, might've been true. You moved with practiced ease, slinging caf, dodging jokes, and laughing at war stories with just the right amount of enthusiasm.
Fox hadn't shown up yet.
Which was fine. Totally fine. You weren't waiting or anything. Definitely not.
So when a shiny walked up—fresh armor, no markings, bright eyes and all swagger—you smiled automatically.
"Hey there, trooper. What'll it be?"
He leaned on the counter a little too smoothly. "Whatever you recommend. You've got great taste, right?"
You raised an eyebrow. "In caf or in people?"
He grinned. "Hopefully both."
You laughed—not because it was funny, but because it was so bold. He looked about fifteen seconds out of Kamino, full of confidence and charm. The kind of guy who still thought he was invincible.
You liked his energy. Not like-liked, but it was... cute.
So you poured him something with a little extra foam art—because why not? You were allowed to flirt sometimes. Fox certainly wasn't yours.
And then—just as the shiny said, "If I'd known caf girls were this gorgeous, I'd have transferred sooner"—you felt it.
The shift.
A chill ran up your spine. The air got... heavier.
"Trooper."
The voice was unmistakable. Dry, clipped, and sharp enough to slice through steel.
You turned. And there he was.
Commander Fox. Full armor. Full glare. Standing two paces behind the shiny like a thunderstorm in red.
The rookie flinched. "Sir!"
Fox didn't even look at you—just stared the kid down.
"You're holding up the line."
"I—I was just—"
"She's not your mission," Fox said flatly. "Move."
The shiny didn't need telling twice. He grabbed his caf like it was a thermal detonator and bolted.
You blinked, stunned. "Fox..."
He walked up slowly, that same permanent scowl on his face—but his eyes? They were blazing.
"Didn't realize we were flirting with rookies now."
You snorted. "We? I was being nice."
"He was drooling."
"Maybe I'm charming."
He stared. "You're mine."
Your heart skipped. "Excuse me?"
He froze, like the words had jumped out before he could stop them. Then he looked away, jaw tightening.
"I mean... this is your caf stand. Yours. Not for flirting. Not for—" he sighed, cutting himself off. "He's not good enough."
You tilted your head, stepping closer across the counter. "And who is?"
He didn't answer.
So you leaned in a little more, voice soft. "Was that jealousy, Commander?"
He met your gaze finally, and this time, his voice was quiet.
"Yeah."
You stared at him, your heart doing somersaults.
"You could've just said you like me."
"I thought I was being obvious."
You grinned. "You glared a child into submission."
He shrugged. "He had it coming."
You reached across the counter, brushing his hand. "Well, for the record... I'm not into shinies."
His brows lifted slightly. "No?"
"Nope." You handed him his usual. "I've got a thing for grumpy commanders in red armor."
For the first time in weeks, he smiled.
Not a smirk. Not a twitch.
A real one.
Small. Rare.
Perfect.